What is wrong with this body paragraph?
First of all, I learned that chiggers are the larvae of tiny mites found in the woods and that their bites are always multiple and cause intense itching. A beautiful summer day
seemed perfect for a walk in the woods. I am definitely not a city person for I couldn't stand to be surrounded by people, noise, and concrete. As I walked through the ferns
and pines, I noticed what appeared to be a dusting of reddish seeds or pollen on my slacks. Looking more closely, I realized that each speck was a tiny insect. I casually
brushed off a few and gave them no further thought I woke up the next moming feeling like a victim staked to an anthill by an enemy wise in the ways of torture. Most of my
body was specided with measlike bumps that at the slightest touch burned and itched like a mosquito bite raised to the twentieth power. When antiseptics and calamine
lotion failed to help. I raced to my doctor for emergency aid.

Answer :

There shouldn’t be two ands in the first paragraph use one and then use also.

Third paragraph in last sentence too shirt take away period and put and put a period after thought.

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