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The sentence ‘..she one lost or him’ it doesn’t make sense
You could rewrite it as “Even though it didn’t matter how many nights Honey would spend taking about the moon she once lost. Fables of his own often sparked by an ounce of truth…”
Your sentence didn’t make sense, could rewrite it as
Moon knelt beside her and softly spoke to her ‘like no one else had done’
You don’t need ‘surprisingly willing’ remove surprisingly
It would also not mention.. doesn’t make sense
Try “ the story wouldn’t mention how roses grew from her wrists’
Your last sentence ‘ and was never the right time’
Rewrite it as ‘ Never was the right time’
Hope this helps. Other than these minor sentences. Very good!
You could rewrite it as “Even though it didn’t matter how many nights Honey would spend taking about the moon she once lost. Fables of his own often sparked by an ounce of truth…”
Your sentence didn’t make sense, could rewrite it as
Moon knelt beside her and softly spoke to her ‘like no one else had done’
You don’t need ‘surprisingly willing’ remove surprisingly
It would also not mention.. doesn’t make sense
Try “ the story wouldn’t mention how roses grew from her wrists’
Your last sentence ‘ and was never the right time’
Rewrite it as ‘ Never was the right time’
Hope this helps. Other than these minor sentences. Very good!